Going to Ohope And theZorb

My Plan for a Recount

Title of my story:

Going to Ohope and The Zorb

Orientation: Use keywords to explain

Where	Ohope	Here are some connectives you may want to use instead of THEN to move your story on: after a while      afterwards      at once     at this moment at this point       before that     finally     first (second third etc...) here            in the end       lastly        later on      meanwhile next     next time     now      on another occasion previously       since     soon      straightaway   until then when      whenever      while
When	On the Weekend
What	Surfing and eating
Why	Mini Day holiday
Who	My mum my cousins and tackle rugby friends.

These are the things I am writing about in the right order: (Use keywords only - you can add details when you write your story.)

Event 1	surfing
Event 2	Swim
Event 3	Go home
Event 4	Going to Zorb

WALT write a recount. Success Criteria: An orientation that describes where, when and who. A sequence of events in the right order. Connectives to lead the reader on ( e.g. first, next, after a while, a moment later, at last, finally) A conclusion. A personal comment.

Start with your title below

Going to Ohope and the Zorb.

In the weekend I went to Ohope. I went surfing and went to Columbus Cafe to have a Gross Decadent Hot Chocolate. So then I went home.

We hit the road and went back to Rotorua. Then the day after that I went to the zorb and went round and round and I nearly got killed. So I was facing back and all the water came down on me. Then round and round and round, after I got off and went to the spa to warm up. Finally I went Home.