The white tailed spider. By Tina Johnson

How i made my Butterfly

stay at home

My Plan for a Recount

Title of my story:

Stay at home

Orientation: Use keywords to explain

Where	Home	Here are some connectives you may want to use instead of THEN to move your story on: after a while      afterwards      at once     at this moment at this point       before that     finally     first (second third etc...) here            in the end       lastly        later on      meanwhile next     next time     now      on another occasion previously       since     soon      straightaway   until then when      whenever      while
When	Saturday And Sunday
Who	Me 5 cousins! dad aunty uncle mum

These are the things I am writing about in the right order: (Use keywords only - you can add details when you write your story.)

Event 1	Play coussins
Event 2	Play ipad
Event 3	Minecraft with dad
Event 4	Watchdogs 2

WALHT write a recount. Success Criteria: An orientation that describes where, when and who. A sequence of events in the right order. Connectives to lead the reader on ( e.g. first, next, after a while, a moment later, at last, finally) A conclusion. A personal comment.

Me and dad went to go and play minecraft on the ipads when my 3 cousins came into the room 1 .of them said can i go on minecraft with you.I did not say an answer. Then he keep on say it on and on and on and i just said a no!!I was just about to finish the conversation when a light bulb came into my brain.I turned off my ipad and i tuned on the ps4 and started playing my game called.Whachdogs 2.

And he wanted to on this?Wow this guy is insane! so i got out my quadcopter and jumper to to hack into a modem got it i said then my other two cousins came. into the room too and i said let’s go on the tramp.And later that day my cousins left then i got very bored. And i went to the kitchen and guess who showed up?MY UNCLE!!WE went to go on my tramp and jump high.    

Swimming sports

Swimming Sports I did free style and a whole length of the pool, a width of the pool too and a couple more. Then it was the donut race and we lapped them by 2 or 3. It was fun. After the sport were over I went in the inside pool and then I saw my cousins with my apple watch. It was the best day!